Jake was filmed by Noah.
Thursday, 26 November 2015
One For the Dads! Read a Great Piece of Writing From Jake
Minecraft Gets Old!
by Jake
Once upon a time there lived a boy called Jake who was obsessed with Minecraft. He loved how there was TNT, Blocks and Players and so much more. He played Creative and Survival. He made houses and farms but what he didn't know was… it was about to come to an end. (You know parents trying to get their children off devices?)
But one day the Mums and Dads got so angry that they built a robot. That robot scanned the whole world for children on devices but the kids didn’t like this so there was a war between kids and adults. After a few hours kids won.
They played Minecraft for days,months,years but one day a kid became an adult. Then this happened more and more and more but Minecraft didn’t stop. It went on… … …………..
………….....because adults are just secretly older kids!Monday, 18 May 2015
Persuasive Writing
Can we convince you to agree with us? We're good at pleading the case orally when we want something from our parents. Now we're using those skills to write a persuasive argument.
Bad Mrs Pig
Some people think Mrs Pig was not a good parent. I think Mrs Pig was no good. What do you think?
Firstly, because she knew there was an angry wolf outside in the wild so why let them out?
Mrs Pig knew the three little pigs would not be safe. They were not that smart. For example two pigs didn’t make their houses very stable!
by Matthew
Bad Mrs Pig
Some people think Mrs Pig was not a good parent. I think Mrs Pig was no good. What do you think?
Firstly, because she knew there was an angry wolf outside in the wild so why let them out?
Mrs Pig knew the three little pigs would not be safe. They were not that smart. For example two pigs didn’t make their houses very stable!
by Matthew
Mrs Pig: Good or Bad?
I think Mrs Pig is a good parent.
Firstly, Mrs Pig did warn the three little pigs about the big bad wolf.
Secondly she was nice to let them have freedom.
Lastly they were at the right age to be away from their mother.
That's my opinion and I hope you agree with me.
By Auralie
Mrs Pig: Good or Bad?
Mrs Pig: Good or Bad?
I think that Mrs Pig is not a good parent.
My reason is she could train them just for a few weeks until they get the idea of how to make a meal or put together bricks to build a house. Then they wouldn't have to go like, "This goes here. No,no. This goes here. No,no.
here. No, no.This goes here. No, no. This goes here."Mrs Pig could send the oldest pig out. Then, if the first pig that went out said he went well building the house, she would send the other two out to build houses. Sometimes their mum, if she is not busy, she can visit them at their house.
Or Mrs Pig could train them and let the pig that did the best building go out first and in a few weeks she can visit him and train the other pigs for a few more days.
So I hope you agree with me that Mrs Pig could train the pigs before they go out to the world. Then she would be a good mum.
by Angie
Mrs Pig: Good or Bad?
I think that Mrs Pig is not a good parent.
My reason is she could train them just for a few weeks until they get the idea of how to make a meal or put together bricks to build a house. Then they wouldn't have to go like, "This goes here. No,no. This goes here. No,no.
Or Mrs Pig could train them and let the pig that did the best building go out first and in a few weeks she can visit him and train the other pigs for a few more days.
So I hope you agree with me that Mrs Pig could train the pigs before they go out to the world. Then she would be a good mum.
by Angie
Wednesday, 13 May 2015
Sunday, 10 May 2015
Did You Ever?
Do
kayaking
At the
Millenium Centre?
Heart pumping,
Sideways rocking,
Splash out of the kayak!
Thump! Into someone.
It is cool!
…..
by
Donnacha
Did You Ever?
Go
kayaking
At the Millenium Centre?
Paddles
dripping,
Water
splashing,
Boat
floating,
Arms
swinging side to side.
Give
it a go!
It’s
fun!
…..
by
Angie
Did You Ever?
Go to kayaking
At the Millenium Pool?
Arms
waving,
Hands
rocking,
Rock
and rock,
Off the kayak,
Under
water.
Go and
have a try!
…..
by Ryan and David
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